By Schism Rent Asunder
Weber fans, rejoice! The continuation of Off Armageddon Reef is available in stores now.
There are definitely some good things about the novel (that I’ll get to in a moment) that should keep Weber fans satisfied. However, there are some flaws as well, and I would be remiss if I didn’t at least mention them due to the frustration that I experienced with the text at several moments.
Weber has plotted this series exquisitely so far. He shows a great eye for intrigue and political machinations. His world works the way its drawn. His characters are also incredibly detailed given how little time he spends with each of them. This is more a credit to Weber’s skill as a writer than anything, that he can fill in the small idiosyncrasies of even minor characters to a degree that they are memorable. Setting is likewise well-done; everything from the economics of each “player’s” position to the wildlife and the weather is handled adroitly.
If all this is so good, then what complaints do I have?
Simply put, the novel is unwieldy because of its attention to detail. There are too many characters, too many subplots, and too much of a “God’s eye view” to really do anything more than be a series of episodic narratives. Weber ties them together with (arguably) more skill than Tom Clancy ever did, but readers are left with a feeling of dissatisfaction. It’s like eating a tasty meal that doesn’t quite fill you up.
I have a real issue with the way in which Weber is choosing to spell his character names. They are common names, but John, for example, is spelled “Zhan.” Most of the “i” sounds are replaced with a “y.” There are other irregularities, but it is somewhat jarring to be cruising along in the narrative only to be faced with the odd spellings. One odd spelling is charming, two or three might give a flair for nationality. An entire cast of characters with odd spellings makes for a difficult read.
Weber should be commended for not making cookie-cutter villains. Very few of his “bad” characters are ever stupid, but in this series, they are showing remarkable capability. Weber perhaps makes them a bit too sympathetic for the purposes of his narrative, diluting the true purpose of his anointed heroes and heroines with perspectives inside the enemy’s head.
I suppose the thing that bugs me the most is that the first book in this series showed so much promise that the second book failed to deliver in the expected fashion. I’m not sure quite what I expected, but after reading Off Armageddon Reef, I was prepared for another series as epic as Dune (Herbert), Foundation (Asimov), or Hyperion (Simmons). Weber may have had to write a “bridge” novel to get us through the to the third book in the series; if so, I’ll reserve judgment until the end.
Pete on August 25th 2008 in Book Reviews
For some reason, I’ve missed most of McDevitt’s fiction during my tenure as a science fiction reader. I first read some of his short stories in the anthology Breach the Hull, which Mike McPhail of MilSciFi.com provided for my review. I enjoyed his prose immensely, so I decided to see what he had recently written.
Jack Campbell continues with his aggressive publishing schedule by releasing the fourth book in the Lost Fleet series just eight months after the last one.









